Thursday 17 December 2015

Teacher Feedback: First draft

The feedback we got from our teacher was that the sound and voice over was really good, but needs to be separated so that the viewers don't get confused as to what they are supposed to be listening too. Also there needs to be more to the ending of the opening such as more enigma code, as it is not clear as to what is going to happen next. The titles need to be adjusted to the same font, the correct order and the same length. Finally put Film Nations sooner in the opening, and justify why we have used black and white on our blogs.

No comments:

Post a Comment